IronLungz (NBS) [vs.] ViiRu5 (HHB) - Page 2

IronLungzz · 03-18-2007, 09:57 PM

^lol I Run and Iron don't sound alike so your a newb, he had 2 way better bars then that.

G Baller · 03-18-2007, 10:00 PM

I'll vote later tonight if the battle aint dunn

LaWN NAiL · 03-18-2007, 11:35 PM

Iron is pronounced I-EARN........{fuckin' nigg3rs}

Nick_Kase · 03-19-2007, 12:05 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by -ThE~DoN~LoN-

Iron is pronounced I-EARN........{fuckin' nigg3rs}

no its pronounced I-Ron {fuckin' Lonni3 }

tfaaaa · 03-19-2007, 12:07 AM

I Was About To Say How Fuckin Forced Iron Is With I Run...He Said He Was Wowed By It Too....

Killuminati · 03-19-2007, 12:41 AM

uhms..word

this is how i saw it

Flow: Neither...straight inconsistent. gota have around the same amount of syllables per bar...did that for 2 lines, and then switched it up

Multies: Meh...Tie. IL multies were a lot more complex, but forced, and while Virius was simple, they fit his verse alot better

Personals: None, Nameplay doesnt count.

Punches: I was feelin IL more. Some good ones, and some ba dones too. overall tho, he satyed ok with em. My advice to IL tho is make the punch fit the bar...dont go fuckin your bars up for one punchline...if it doesnt fit, write it down, and take it out. use it later.

Wordplay: Both had some nice WP, but i was feelin Virius more. The abel shit was nice...PD and LAS had me like whoa cuz i didnt know that shit. However...shit like this..."I get calls (callouts) like verizon, be prepared ya death's on the horizon//
you are my son, lyrically? u cant get at my tongue, i'll "rip out" ya "lungz" and you'll be left screamin "I Run!" (iron)//"

Bruh...That makes sense, but so what? Thats not hard hitting. (Besises can you scream if you dont have any lungs?) You coulda made that a nice lil WP/Punch...but w/e

Creativity: Virius

Overall...Virius by a little. I feel that IL had a much nicer verse in general, but Virius came in with a battle mindset. you feel me? Some of the punches IL used were good, but they were general, and mosta virius shit was directly aimed at IL.

Both have potential, just work on what i told you.

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-19-2007, 01:00 AM

thanks 4 vote and feed man.....3-1 for me..,uppin

HH4ll · 03-19-2007, 01:47 AM

umm. . .all i\\\'ma say is this. . .virus other than abel/able. . .your wordplays were all really forced. . .las/loss doesn\'t work. . .same with iron/i run. . .clientele/client l works, but makes no sense. . .call your next client loss? (u said l as in loss). . .makes no sense. . .and because you didn\'t say loss and replaced it with the l. . .it becomes a wack/forced wordplay

iron . . .all that virus/tv shit is mad played by now. . .even if your mentioning robitussin and throats and shit, not just a virus-antidote (correct grammar???). . .its still been used a bunch of times before.. . .

i was expecting a lot more from virus the way he\\\'s been. . .e-carrying himself around. . .but meh. . .

1

Over_Flow · 03-19-2007, 08:03 AM

punches: lungz...by a lil because his punches were harder...
wordplay: viirus....may have been forced but he had 1 good 1
multies: lungzz....he had better ones
personals: lungz....he had the thing wit his battle record
flow: viirus.....he didnt stretch is bars to much...neither did lungz but virruses flowed better

overall: meh...pretty close battle....ive seen lungz do better (on nbs) and i see viirus improved a bit....yall both came at eachother pretty hard but i felt lungzz did a little better....viirus u had some forced wordplay but lungzz didnt really have any wordplay so virrus got that cat....but u both came good....winner in my eyes is.....lungzz

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-19-2007, 06:04 PM

3-2 for me...uppin for more. and yes call his next client loss. his name is iron lungz. im going to give iron lungzz to the loss. do u get it?

J High · 03-19-2007, 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

you are my son, lyrically? u cant get at my tongue, i'll "rip out" ya "lungz" and you'll be left screamin "I Run!" (iron)//

LOL @ I Run being wordplay of IRON....what kind of accent do you have?

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-19-2007, 06:17 PM

ive heard it liek that be4.....bu anyway 3-2 uppin

LaWN NAiL · 03-19-2007, 08:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mr. Kase

no its pronounced I-Ron {fuckin' Lonni3 }

Its Pronounced ahy-ern...Ahy is pronounced like "I"....Ern...is pronounced Like "Earn"

...{fuckin' idiota}

..pwn'd

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-20-2007, 04:45 PM

^^ as irritating as it may be, some people pronounce it like that. I've heard it if you haven't. otherwise iwouldnt put it in......

3-2 uppin for more

IronLungzz · 03-20-2007, 05:35 PM

all my punches were aimed at him, 3-2? upps, thx for votes...

IronLungzz · 03-20-2007, 05:37 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Over_Flow

punches: lungz...by a lil because his punches were harder...
wordplay: viirus....may have been forced but he had 1 good 1
multies: lungzz....he had better ones
personals: lungz....he had the thing wit his battle record
flow: viirus.....he didnt stretch is bars to much...neither did lungz but virruses flowed better

overall: meh...pretty close battle....ive seen lungz do better (on nbs) and i see viirus improved a bit....yall both came at eachother pretty hard but i felt lungzz did a little better....viirus u had some forced wordplay but lungzz didnt really have any wordplay so virrus got that cat....but u both came good....winner in my eyes is.....lungzz

thx for the vote...And u seen my battle on NBS?

Over_Flow · 03-20-2007, 05:40 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by IronLungzz

thx for the vote...And u seen my battle on NBS?

i saw a battle of urs on nbs......im not a member but i can still view the shit lol...and ive checked ur stuff on nbs out and i think u can do better than wat u did in this battle

Killuminati · 03-20-2007, 06:01 PM

its pronounced i-earn...don is right

but i have heard it pronounced i-run before

you know how slang is lol

IronLungzz · 03-20-2007, 06:04 PM

Yeah but even though Virus came good, i was writting for a different battler, caz the verse i seen it wasnt anywhere near as good.

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-20-2007, 06:15 PM

its w/e lets get some more votes, 3-2

mtownhustla · 03-20-2007, 06:41 PM

Good Battle Yall..

IronLungzz · 03-20-2007, 07:16 PM

Thx, lets get some more vet votes..

ThA ViiRu5 · 03-21-2007, 12:04 AM

3-2 for me, uppin for more.....

IronLungzz · 03-21-2007, 12:46 AM

^Word........

IronLungzz · 03-21-2007, 04:29 PM

upp........

03-18-2007, 09:57 PM	#26
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^lol I Run and Iron don't sound alike so your a newb, he had 2 way better bars then that. __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-19-2007, 01:00 AM	#32
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	thanks 4 vote and feed man.....3-1 for me..,uppin __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-19-2007, 06:04 PM	#35
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	3-2 for me...uppin for more. and yes call his next client loss. his name is iron lungz. im going to give iron lungzz to the loss. do u get it? __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-19-2007, 06:17 PM	#37
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	ive heard it liek that be4.....bu anyway 3-2 uppin __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-20-2007, 04:45 PM	#39
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	^^ as irritating as it may be, some people pronounce it like that. I've heard it if you haven't. otherwise iwouldnt put it in...... 3-2 uppin for more __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-18-2007, 10:00 PM	#27
G Baller Own Count 94-0 Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 101 Repped: 36 Repped 12 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I'll vote later tonight if the battle aint dunn

03-18-2007, 11:35 PM	#28
LaWN NAiL Lonnel Join Date: May 2006 Location: chicago Posts: 3,199 Repped: 190 Repped 352 Times in 108 Posts Neg Reps: 16 Neg Repped at 85 Times in 33 Posts	Iron is pronounced I-EARN........{fuckin' nigg3rs}

03-19-2007, 12:07 AM	#30
tfaaaa Junior Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 14 Repped: 0 Repped 1 Time in 1 Post Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	I Was About To Say How Fuckin Forced Iron Is With I Run...He Said He Was Wowed By It Too....

03-19-2007, 12:41 AM	#31
Killuminati ..........FUHCKA......... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: You Know What It Is... Posts: 3,517 Repped: 177 Repped 139 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 10 Posts	uhms..word this is how i saw it Flow: Neither...straight inconsistent. gota have around the same amount of syllables per bar...did that for 2 lines, and then switched it up Multies: Meh...Tie. IL multies were a lot more complex, but forced, and while Virius was simple, they fit his verse alot better Personals: None, Nameplay doesnt count. Punches: I was feelin IL more. Some good ones, and some ba dones too. overall tho, he satyed ok with em. My advice to IL tho is make the punch fit the bar...dont go fuckin your bars up for one punchline...if it doesnt fit, write it down, and take it out. use it later. Wordplay: Both had some nice WP, but i was feelin Virius more. The abel shit was nice...PD and LAS had me like whoa cuz i didnt know that shit. However...shit like this..."I get calls (callouts) like verizon, be prepared ya death's on the horizon// you are my son, lyrically? u cant get at my tongue, i'll "rip out" ya "lungz" and you'll be left screamin "I Run!" (iron)//" Bruh...That makes sense, but so what? Thats not hard hitting. (Besises can you scream if you dont have any lungs?) You coulda made that a nice lil WP/Punch...but w/e Creativity: Virius Overall...Virius by a little. I feel that IL had a much nicer verse in general, but Virius came in with a battle mindset. you feel me? Some of the punches IL used were good, but they were general, and mosta virius shit was directly aimed at IL. Both have potential, just work on what i told you.

03-19-2007, 01:47 AM	#33
HH4ll Banned Join Date: Mar 2007 Posts: 197 Repped: 9 Repped 36 Times in 14 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	umm. . .all i\\\'ma say is this. . .virus other than abel/able. . .your wordplays were all really forced. . .las/loss doesn\'t work. . .same with iron/i run. . .clientele/client l works, but makes no sense. . .call your next client loss? (u said l as in loss). . .makes no sense. . .and because you didn\'t say loss and replaced it with the l. . .it becomes a wack/forced wordplay iron . . .all that virus/tv shit is mad played by now. . .even if your mentioning robitussin and throats and shit, not just a virus-antidote (correct grammar???). . .its still been used a bunch of times before.. . . i was expecting a lot more from virus the way he\\\'s been. . .e-carrying himself around. . .but meh. . . 1

03-19-2007, 08:03 AM	#34
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	punches: lungz...by a lil because his punches were harder... wordplay: viirus....may have been forced but he had 1 good 1 multies: lungzz....he had better ones personals: lungz....he had the thing wit his battle record flow: viirus.....he didnt stretch is bars to much...neither did lungz but virruses flowed better overall: meh...pretty close battle....ive seen lungz do better (on nbs) and i see viirus improved a bit....yall both came at eachother pretty hard but i felt lungzz did a little better....viirus u had some forced wordplay but lungzz didnt really have any wordplay so virrus got that cat....but u both came good....winner in my eyes is.....lungzz

03-20-2007, 05:35 PM	#40
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	all my punches were aimed at him, 3-2? upps, thx for votes... __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-20-2007, 06:01 PM	#43
Killuminati ..........FUHCKA......... Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: You Know What It Is... Posts: 3,517 Repped: 177 Repped 139 Times in 70 Posts Neg Reps: 5 Neg Repped at 17 Times in 10 Posts	its pronounced i-earn...don is right but i have heard it pronounced i-run before you know how slang is lol

03-20-2007, 06:04 PM	#44
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yeah but even though Virus came good, i was writting for a different battler, caz the verse i seen it wasnt anywhere near as good. __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-20-2007, 06:15 PM	#45
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	its w/e lets get some more votes, 3-2 __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-20-2007, 06:41 PM	#46
mtownhustla Memphis Boi Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Memphis,TN Posts: 212 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Good Battle Yall..

03-20-2007, 07:16 PM	#47
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Thx, lets get some more vet votes.. __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-21-2007, 12:04 AM	#48
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,617 Repped: 525 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 81 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	3-2 for me, uppin for more..... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

03-21-2007, 12:46 AM	#49
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	^Word........ __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

03-21-2007, 04:29 PM	#50
IronLungzz Wins-5-Loss-1-KO-2- Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: GC Bitches!! Latest Head Killed:.Raveness-KO- Posts: 291 Repped: 0 Repped 6 Times in 4 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	upp........ __________________ ~NAMEPLAY KING~ Killed: ThaViiru5 Aka Utopian, Paranormal (HoShow), Flawlessrikan, Tha Solution

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