CC Vs. JR-One(ready for votes) - Page 2

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-17-2007, 10:46 PM

oh. . .pretty much everyone i talked to hasnt gotten the punchlines (hyphy) no hate . . .so i dont like counting those votes. . .and its kinda bullshit that just cause its dose yall say the shit was wack because u didnt get it to start with. . .

Quote:

I Got Back Up, I'm Phonin' Some People.. Like A Dipset Hat, I Got Ya Dome To This Eagle..

how fucking played was that

ps <3 pandemic. . . nomo

edit: how can u say my multies were forced . . .look at the above line

H.O.V.A. · 02-17-2007, 10:47 PM

nomo=no homo? I hope it does lol

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-17-2007, 10:50 PM

nomo = no homo. . .i abbriveated it. . .=]

edit: dose posted 4 lines then edited it out. . .so technically he posted a 4 line verse. . .i have about 5 things to dq him on

H.O.V.A. · 02-17-2007, 11:12 PM

So do it...Dose is totally acceptable to DQ because he is notorious for damn near (if not straigh up) cheating for wins.

And btw: U can count a DQ as a win if u dropped a verse.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-17-2007, 11:21 PM

dont care about the win. . .it was more of a

dose: your a rookie
me: no im not
dose: battle me

but im debating whether to take the dq. .

M. Expo · 02-17-2007, 11:40 PM

& Since I'm bored..

CC - Your verse was horrible, lol. The first 2 lines weren't that bad in concept, but they were worded pretty badly which took quite a bit away from their effectiveness.

It seemed like you tried way too hard. Complexity is normally a good thing, but you used it poorly. No one wants to have to read a page of bullshit " Who’s to blame for Mexico's failed genocide charge? " to understand a punchline. The wordplay wasn't too great either.. shit like sight/site, pear/pair are both played.. Calculator's/ Cal cue Ater's was madd forced.. The rest were okay..

The structure of your verse was really fucked up & made is annoying to read.. Try & keep your lines the same length.. & make sure they only take up one line.. the multies were ehh, they came off a somewhat forced in a couple places, but you stayed pretty consistent with half-decent ones. The Flow wasn't that bad though.

I honestly think you should try a new style & be more straight foward with your punches because reading your verse was a real pain in the ass. You shouldn't have to explain the punch for people to get.. I mean it's okay if you have to explain it to a couple people cuz this board is full of dumbasses, but this shit wouldn't have even made sense without all those gayass references..

I gotta question about this line though..

" . . .Plus I'll Take Out N.A's (N/A's) Like Enraged Pilgrims With Degrees "

I'm assuming N.A. = Native American?? so that connects to Pilgrims, but what connects with degrees & enraged? I know N/a = No answer, Not applicable, & Not availible... but I can't find the connection?? Maybe Im a dumbass too

Dose - Your verse wasn't that great either, but it was enough to beat CC. The first line was pretty nice.. although I think it might be considered feeding? By the third your shit was getting repetitive.. three bars in a row about his punches/ wordplay.. Lots of your punches were ghey too.. I can't believe you had the nerve to type "think" after that hole to piss through line, & ROTFLMAO @ " Like A Dipset Hat, I Got Ya Dome To This Eagle.. " .. that line is soo played.. & was flipped horribly, same thing with that cast/ move production line..

Your multies were alright.. you started off slow, but picked up from there.. you even your lines a bit too... the flow was aiight..

Overall - I thought dose took this pretty easily.. his verse had better punches, multies, was simple ( which usually isn't a good thing, but after reading CC's verse.... ), Straight foward, & wasn't a pain in the ass to read...

enjoyable to read

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-17-2007, 11:43 PM

u can take your ko. . .thanks for the advice esco. . .

edit: no connection between enraged and degrees. . .but enraged (killing) and degrees (N/A's). .

M. Expo · 02-17-2007, 11:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by +R.A.T.I.F.Y+

u can take your ko. . .thanks for the advice esco. . .

edit: no connection between enraged and degrees. . .but enraged (killing) and degrees (N/A's). .

no.. I meant.. what in that line connected to those words.. like i get how killing can connect with enraged although it's a little vague.. but how exactly does n/a connect to degrees.

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 02-17-2007, 11:53 PM

not applicable. . .if your applying for a job and dont have experience in something and cant answer a question you put N/A. ..but with a degree (or education) in that field u wouldnt have to. . .

Shogun · 02-17-2007, 11:58 PM

CC, you had such an awkward verse; you'll probably find losing your virginity less awkward than that shit.

Dose, you weren't as awkward but you still lacked a lot; so yeah, you didn't suck as much as your opponent but you sucked nonetheless.

JR-One · 02-18-2007, 05:43 AM

^^ Word, I Did.. ..
Mad

At This Entire Battle.. ..
You Realize I Murked You, So You Clutch At Your Straws And Try Scrounging Up A DQ.. ..Pathetic.. ..

JR-One · 02-18-2007, 05:48 AM

1. The "Swaying" Claims Are Invalid.. .. I Simply Stated What You Rapped About.. .. It Didn't Affect The Voting At All.. .. Not Swaying.. ..

JR-One · 02-18-2007, 05:53 AM

2. The "Feeding" In Question Is My Opener,I Presume.. .. I Simply Referenced Your Punches As A Whole.. .. I Never Referenced Your Lines, Which Is What Feeding Is.. .. So, No I Did Not Feed.. ..

JR-One · 02-18-2007, 06:00 AM

3. I Did Post A Few Bars And Edit Them Out Simplmy To See If They Stretched Uo Two Lines.. .. I Can Edit My Verse As Much As I Want, As Long As No One Has Voted Yet.. ..
I Can Explain In Further Detail If Need Be, CC.. ..
Anyways.. .. 3-0 KO

H.O.V.A. · 02-18-2007, 09:39 AM

Yea u probly did win to be honest...CC's shit was too complex to be enjoyable. You shouldn't have to read it more than once to get it on more than mayB one bar in a battle.

~Young Gunna~ · 02-18-2007, 11:28 AM

Blind Drop.. ..
8 Bars.. ..
Due Friday Midnight Pacific Time.. ..

^^
those r the rules.....house rules wasnt stated...so dose didnt break any of those rules except the deadline but cc let it slide...u shouldve been mor specific bout the rules...

dose wins ko...closed

02-18-2007, 05:43 AM	#36
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	^^ Word, I Did.. .. Mad At This Entire Battle.. .. You Realize I Murked You, So You Clutch At Your Straws And Try Scrounging Up A DQ.. ..Pathetic.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

02-18-2007, 05:48 AM	#37
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	1. The "Swaying" Claims Are Invalid.. .. I Simply Stated What You Rapped About.. .. It Didn't Affect The Voting At All.. .. Not Swaying.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

02-18-2007, 05:53 AM	#38
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	2. The "Feeding" In Question Is My Opener,I Presume.. .. I Simply Referenced Your Punches As A Whole.. .. I Never Referenced Your Lines, Which Is What Feeding Is.. .. So, No I Did Not Feed.. .. __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

02-18-2007, 06:00 AM	#39
JR-One Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Van-Kool-Vurr Posts: 1,021 Repped: 19 Repped 52 Times in 20 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 1 Time in 1 Post	3. I Did Post A Few Bars And Edit Them Out Simplmy To See If They Stretched Uo Two Lines.. .. I Can Edit My Verse As Much As I Want, As Long As No One Has Voted Yet.. .. I Can Explain In Further Detail If Need Be, CC.. .. Anyways.. .. 3-0 KO __________________ Cheers To Pacman23.. ..

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02-17-2007, 10:47 PM	#27
H.O.V.A. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: LI Posts: 4,564 Repped: 102 Repped 293 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	nomo=no homo? I hope it does lol

02-17-2007, 10:50 PM	#28
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	nomo = no homo. . .i abbriveated it. . .=] edit: dose posted 4 lines then edited it out. . .so technically he posted a 4 line verse. . .i have about 5 things to dq him on

02-17-2007, 11:12 PM	#29
H.O.V.A. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: LI Posts: 4,564 Repped: 102 Repped 293 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	So do it...Dose is totally acceptable to DQ because he is notorious for damn near (if not straigh up) cheating for wins. And btw: U can count a DQ as a win if u dropped a verse.

02-17-2007, 11:21 PM	#30
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	dont care about the win. . .it was more of a dose: your a rookie me: no im not dose: battle me but im debating whether to take the dq. .

02-17-2007, 11:40 PM	#31
M. Expo Banned Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 55 Repped: 0 Repped 0 Times in 0 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	& Since I'm bored.. CC - Your verse was horrible, lol. The first 2 lines weren't that bad in concept, but they were worded pretty badly which took quite a bit away from their effectiveness. It seemed like you tried way too hard. Complexity is normally a good thing, but you used it poorly. No one wants to have to read a page of bullshit " Who’s to blame for Mexico's failed genocide charge? " to understand a punchline. The wordplay wasn't too great either.. shit like sight/site, pear/pair are both played.. Calculator's/ Cal cue Ater's was madd forced.. The rest were okay.. The structure of your verse was really fucked up & made is annoying to read.. Try & keep your lines the same length.. & make sure they only take up one line.. the multies were ehh, they came off a somewhat forced in a couple places, but you stayed pretty consistent with half-decent ones. The Flow wasn't that bad though. I honestly think you should try a new style & be more straight foward with your punches because reading your verse was a real pain in the ass. You shouldn't have to explain the punch for people to get.. I mean it's okay if you have to explain it to a couple people cuz this board is full of dumbasses, but this shit wouldn't have even made sense without all those gayass references.. I gotta question about this line though.. " . . .Plus I'll Take Out N.A's (N/A's) Like Enraged Pilgrims With Degrees " I'm assuming N.A. = Native American?? so that connects to Pilgrims, but what connects with degrees & enraged? I know N/a = No answer, Not applicable, & Not availible... but I can't find the connection?? Maybe Im a dumbass too Dose - Your verse wasn't that great either, but it was enough to beat CC. The first line was pretty nice.. although I think it might be considered feeding? By the third your shit was getting repetitive.. three bars in a row about his punches/ wordplay.. Lots of your punches were ghey too.. I can't believe you had the nerve to type "think" after that hole to piss through line, & ROTFLMAO @ " Like A Dipset Hat, I Got Ya Dome To This Eagle.. " .. that line is soo played.. & was flipped horribly, same thing with that cast/ move production line.. Your multies were alright.. you started off slow, but picked up from there.. you even your lines a bit too... the flow was aiight.. Overall - I thought dose took this pretty easily.. his verse had better punches, multies, was simple ( which usually isn't a good thing, but after reading CC's verse.... ), Straight foward, & wasn't a pain in the ass to read... enjoyable to read

02-17-2007, 11:43 PM	#32
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	u can take your ko. . .thanks for the advice esco. . . edit: no connection between enraged and degrees. . .but enraged (killing) and degrees (N/A's). .

02-17-2007, 11:53 PM	#34
[CC]Ratify[CC] Banned Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Where It Started At. . .[NY] Posts: 8,373 Repped: 353 Repped 610 Times in 235 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 5 Times in 5 Posts	not applicable. . .if your applying for a job and dont have experience in something and cant answer a question you put N/A. ..but with a degree (or education) in that field u wouldnt have to. . .

02-17-2007, 11:58 PM	#35
Shogun Join Date: May 2006 Posts: 718 Repped: 0 Repped 13 Times in 12 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 4 Times in 4 Posts	CC, you had such an awkward verse; you'll probably find losing your virginity less awkward than that shit. Dose, you weren't as awkward but you still lacked a lot; so yeah, you didn't suck as much as your opponent but you sucked nonetheless.

02-18-2007, 09:39 AM	#40
H.O.V.A. Banned Join Date: Feb 2005 Location: LI Posts: 4,564 Repped: 102 Repped 293 Times in 39 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Yea u probly did win to be honest...CC's shit was too complex to be enjoyable. You shouldn't have to read it more than once to get it on more than mayB one bar in a battle.

02-18-2007, 11:28 AM	#41
~Young Gunna~ Banned Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Gs Us Posts: 10,870 Repped: 156 Repped 574 Times in 243 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 2 Times in 2 Posts	Blind Drop.. .. 8 Bars.. .. Due Friday Midnight Pacific Time.. .. ^^ those r the rules.....house rules wasnt stated...so dose didnt break any of those rules except the deadline but cc let it slide...u shouldve been mor specific bout the rules... dose wins ko...closed