ThA Viirus vs J~Souljah (Mid Inter Tourney 2nd round)

LethalIsILL · 01-28-2007, 09:47 PM

10 lines
mid inters + to vote
due wednesday the 31st
vote in cats or bar by bar

flow-
punches-
personals-
creativity-
wordplay-
multies-
overall-

J~Souljah · 01-28-2007, 09:51 PM

lol checkin in

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 12:12 AM

chizzeck...

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 02:06 PM

......dont kid J, you are not vet kid...which way to the bar, im messed bitch......
......u can trip, hate, but ima star and the best shit..i'll 'misshape ya bars" like tetris......
......snitch wait, i'll call on ya death wish, u wont breathe in instants.. ya cannot see the sickness......
......fuck around and i'll leave the piff shit... bleed the mizfit.. kuz i got you "on the beam" like gymnasts......
......on the scene; im viscious.. believe me i'm paid b..ya shits cheesy not gravy......
......this fucker "kisses men" and "stunts like me"..call him Weezy F. Baby......[im ya fatha]
......gimme a reason to spray B..too nice to see ya, more than a smidge i'll beat you......
......i got "ice and cream", "throw ya in the fridge"..kuz ya seem to like DQ......*
......when i breeze thru, bitch im payed, ur shit is played put the gun to his iris......
......gettin money the quickest way, give 'em aids..the only way he fuckin wit Viirus......

* - DQ = Dairy Queen..which explains the other shit..but also he won his last tourny battle by DQ..G/L

J~Souljah · 01-29-2007, 03:09 PM

typa nigga 2 see da CoPz~N~Go~ChaSe~Em...CoPz~CaN~Go~TaPe~Em
RoCkIn~BrUhZ~FaCe~In...on it u seein mo DoTz~DeN~Ya~LoCaTiOn*
blind Da~FiNeSt...pop Ya~IrIs...dotz on ya tail FuCk~CoMmAz
me makin da slugz n body partz spread da only way u ThA~ViRuS
FeElIn~RiGhT?...wrong...nigga i'm so high like i'm WiElDiN~KiTeZ
droppin pointz in NBA LIVE da onlin way u KiLlIn~MiKeZ/ MiCz...unda his sn
ya verse vs. mine?....if u stylin..nigga wut i'm doin cant be DeFiNeD
go hov on em...poundz like lincoln....see da way it CoLlIdE**
FuCk~U~DeAd~Man....BuCk~Da~LeAd~MaN...linez put u 2 BeD~MaN
u wanna CHAT...nigga u'll get shot like a FuCkIn~WeB~CaM

*his location juss got dotz
**jay~z n LINKIN park on collision course

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 01-29-2007, 03:23 PM

Quote:

......dont kid J, you are not vet kid...which way to the bar, im messed bitch......
......u can trip, hate, but ima star and the best shit..i'll 'misshape ya bars" like tetris......

ok. . .stretched as fuck. . .your multies are forced. . .your first line was poor. . .the punch was decent. . .2/5

Quote:

......snitch wait, i'll call on ya death wish, u wont breathe in instants.. ya cannot see the sickness......
......fuck around and i'll leave the piff shit... bleed the mizfit.. kuz i got you "on the beam" like gymnasts......

better bar. . .again forcing multies and stretched. . .2.5/5

Quote:

......on the scene; im viscious.. believe me i'm paid b..ya shits cheesy not gravy......
......this fucker "kisses men" and "stunts like me"..call him Weezy F. Baby......[im ya fatha]

nope.. . .this fucked up your flow and just sucked imo. . .0/5

Quote:

......gimme a reason to spray B..too nice to see ya, more than a smidge i'll beat you......
......i got "ice and cream", "throw ya in the fridge"..kuz ya seem to like DQ......*

i liked this actually. . .all around was good except for flow. . .didnt force multies here. . .3.5/5

Quote:

......when i breeze thru, bitch im payed, ur shit is played put the gun to his iris......
......gettin money the quickest way, give 'em aids..the only way he fuckin wit Viirus......

nope. . .awful closer. . .anything about aids (AIDS) wordplay is played. . .and i dont know if u meant it to be wordplay lol. . . .0.5/5
Bozz Score - 8.5/25

Quote:

typa nigga 2 see da CoPz~N~Go~ChaSe~Em...CoPz~CaN~Go~TaPe~Em
RoCkIn~BrUhZ~FaCe~In...on it u seein mo DoTz~DeN~Ya~LoCaTiOn*

your DoTz~DeN multi was off syllable count. . .it was a good punch/personal imo. . .not stretched at all. . .2.5/5

Quote:

blind Da~FiNeSt...pop Ya~IrIs...dotz on ya tail FuCk~CoMmAz
me makin da slugz n body partz spread da only way u ThA~ViRuS

this was awful. . .mainly because commas and virus DONT RHYME. . .0/5

Quote:

FeElIn~RiGhT?...wrong...nigga i'm so high like i'm WiElDiN~KiTeZ
droppin pointz in NBA LIVE da onlin way u KiLlIn~MiKeZ/

how do u kill mikes in nba live exactly. . .i know what your saying but it was worded very poorly. . .1.5/5

Quote:

ya verse vs. mine?....if u stylin..nigga wut i'm doin cant be DeFiNeD
go hov on em...poundz like lincoln....see da way it CoLlIdE**

ok. .trying to play off hova's line. . .did a bad job of it. . .lincoln high school doesnt 'pound'. . .the city of lincoln doesnt 'pound'. . .and abraham lincoln isnt on a pound. . .lawl. . .so what are you exactly saying. . .1/5^

Quote:

FuCk~U~DeAd~Man....BuCk~Da~LeAd~MaN...linez put u 2 BeD~MaN
u wanna CHAT...nigga u'll get shot like a FuCkIn~WeB~CaM

sadly. . .i liked this a lot lol. . .much better closer than bozz. . .3.5/5
Spinna Score - 8.5/25

So Tie. . Cats:
Flow - Spinna
Personals - Spinna
Multies - Spinna. . .Bozz Forces His Way Too Much
Punchlines - Bozz. . .Liked Them Better Overall
Wordplay - Bozz. . .He Tried. . .If He Thinks Like I Do Then He Did. . .
Creatitvity: Bozz. . .

Overall - Spinna. . .Weak Battle Though IMO
Why Did Spinna Win?? BECAUSE HE HAD MORE THAN ONE GOOD PERSONAL WHICH ARE THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IN A BATTLE. . .

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 03:29 PM

aight aight 0-1 uppin for votes

J~Souljah · 01-29-2007, 03:29 PM

lol pahahha

u harsh as shit hahah

but 1~0

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 03:30 PM

and by the way i meant since my name was virus..fuckin has a double meaning..u get aids by fucking ppl...there u go

[CC]Ratify[CC] · 01-29-2007, 03:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by ThA ViiRu5

and by the way i meant since my name was virus..fuckin has a double meaning..u get aids by fucking ppl...there u go

i understood that dun. . .it still sucked ass. . .im smart. . .i got that. . .thats why u got wordplay. . .

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 03:32 PM

aight kzu i always thought wordplay was like... well nvm we all copecetic now.

0-1 uppin

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 04:20 PM

bump.........

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 04:37 PM

bump.........

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 04:47 PM

and by the way ur personal doesnt work kuz my thing says MC killa not Mic Killa

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-29-2007, 04:57 PM

bummpppp.....

J~Souljah · 01-29-2007, 05:07 PM

o well....mc standz 4 mic controller

so it does workz...kinda

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-30-2007, 03:49 PM

bumpin for more votes

Jay Hussle · 01-30-2007, 04:48 PM

Flow - TIE
Personals - Spinna
Multies - Spinna
Punchlines - Bozz
Wordplay - Bozz
Creatitvity: Bozz
Overall-BOZZ

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-30-2007, 04:51 PM

are u a mid inter?

J~Souljah · 01-30-2007, 04:57 PM

hate vote....plain n simple

NEXT

ThA ViiRu5 · 01-30-2007, 04:58 PM

why what happend

J~Souljah · 01-30-2007, 05:03 PM

if das who i think it is.......

kid b on sum hatin shit 75% of da time

plus i dissed him

plus mah crew was beefin wit his

Jay Hussle · 01-30-2007, 05:08 PM

wat the hell are u talkin bout
first off
im not in countdown nor
IRC

im goin to IRC(WELL TRYIN)
then u neva dissed me in ya life
if so i would have had a diss out by now

This is Not Kid Blaze or who eva
Jay hussle new here
thank u

J~Souljah · 01-30-2007, 05:13 PM

lol i thought u was hyphy or whoeva lol

1~1

Over_Flow · 01-30-2007, 06:15 PM

lmao j dont count kabooms vote...kaboom aint even on tha mc list and if he was they would have 2 make a spot for low low low low low low low rookie..check his hit he wack....so its 1-0 j.....o ya and i should be mid inter but sum guy wouldnt chage the damn mc list cuz he lazy lol

01-28-2007, 09:47 PM	#1
LethalIsILL Go play somewhere im busy Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: in the air i dont hear niggas corny raps Posts: 6,951 Repped: 135 Repped 993 Times in 212 Posts Neg Reps: 53 Neg Repped at 74 Times in 53 Posts	ThA Viirus vs J~Souljah (Mid Inter Tourney 2nd round) ThA Viirus vs J~Souljah (Mid Inter Tourney 2nd round) 10 lines mid inters + to vote due wednesday the 31st vote in cats or bar by bar flow- punches- personals- creativity- wordplay- multies- overall- __________________ [12:55AM] sbrecords: ziz is there an ignore button for a member in the chatbox? [12:56AM] Mixtape Assassin: if there wuz one i wouldnt even have read your message just now lol

01-29-2007, 12:12 AM	#3
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	chizzeck... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 02:06 PM	#4
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	......dont kid J, you are not vet kid...which way to the bar, im messed bitch...... ......u can trip, hate, but ima star and the best shit..i'll 'misshape ya bars" like tetris...... ......snitch wait, i'll call on ya death wish, u wont breathe in instants.. ya cannot see the sickness...... ......fuck around and i'll leave the piff shit... bleed the mizfit.. kuz i got you "on the beam" like gymnasts...... ......on the scene; im viscious.. believe me i'm paid b..ya shits cheesy not gravy...... ......this fucker "kisses men" and "stunts like me"..call him Weezy F. Baby......[im ya fatha] ......gimme a reason to spray B..too nice to see ya, more than a smidge i'll beat you...... ......i got "ice and cream", "throw ya in the fridge"..kuz ya seem to like DQ......* ......when i breeze thru, bitch im payed, ur shit is played put the gun to his iris...... ......gettin money the quickest way, give 'em aids..the only way he fuckin wit Viirus...... * - DQ = Dairy Queen..which explains the other shit..but also he won his last tourny battle by DQ..G/L __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 03:29 PM	#7
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	aight aight 0-1 uppin for votes __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 03:30 PM	#9
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	and by the way i meant since my name was virus..fuckin has a double meaning..u get aids by fucking ppl...there u go __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-28-2007, 09:51 PM	#2
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	lol checkin in

01-29-2007, 03:09 PM	#5
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	typa nigga 2 see da CoPz~N~Go~ChaSe~Em...CoPz~CaN~Go~TaPe~Em RoCkIn~BrUhZ~FaCe~In...on it u seein mo DoTz~DeN~Ya~LoCaTiOn* blind Da~FiNeSt...pop Ya~IrIs...dotz on ya tail FuCk~CoMmAz me makin da slugz n body partz spread da only way u ThA~ViRuS FeElIn~RiGhT?...wrong...nigga i'm so high like i'm WiElDiN~KiTeZ droppin pointz in NBA LIVE da onlin way u KiLlIn~MiKeZ/ MiCz...unda his sn ya verse vs. mine?....if u stylin..nigga wut i'm doin cant be DeFiNeD go hov on em...poundz like lincoln....see da way it CoLlIdE FuCk~U~DeAd~Man....BuCk~Da~LeAd~MaN...linez put u 2 BeD~MaN u wanna CHAT...nigga u'll get shot like a FuCkIn~WeB~CaM** his location juss got dotz *jay~z n LINKIN park on collision course

01-29-2007, 03:32 PM	#11
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	aight kzu i always thought wordplay was like... well nvm we all copecetic now. 0-1 uppin __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 04:20 PM	#12
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	bump......... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 04:37 PM	#13
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	bump......... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 04:47 PM	#14
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	and by the way ur personal doesnt work kuz my thing says MC killa not Mic Killa __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 04:57 PM	#15
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	bummpppp..... __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-29-2007, 05:07 PM	#16
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	o well....mc standz 4 mic controller so it does workz...kinda

01-30-2007, 03:49 PM	#17
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	bumpin for more votes __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-30-2007, 04:48 PM	#18
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	Flow - TIE Personals - Spinna Multies - Spinna Punchlines - Bozz Wordplay - Bozz Creatitvity: Bozz Overall-BOZZ

01-30-2007, 04:51 PM	#19
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	are u a mid inter? __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-30-2007, 04:57 PM	#20
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	hate vote....plain n simple NEXT

01-30-2007, 04:58 PM	#21
ThA ViiRu5 ``Enlightened Emcee::.. Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: ................ Posts: 2,606 Repped: 521 Repped 179 Times in 104 Posts Neg Reps: 78 Neg Repped at 16 Times in 15 Posts	why what happend __________________ "The only thing that comes to a sleeping man is dreams" ReCkoRd - [Victoriez]: 27 [Slipp Uppz]: 8 [KO]: 13 [TKO]: 1 ~~``!!...::Forever Undefeated::...!!``~~ HeAvYwEiGhT

01-30-2007, 05:03 PM	#22
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	if das who i think it is....... kid b on sum hatin shit 75% of da time plus i dissed him plus mah crew was beefin wit his

01-30-2007, 05:08 PM	#23
Jay Hussle Unimaginable Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: SoufSide Posts: 535 Repped: 0 Repped 52 Times in 9 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	wat the hell are u talkin bout first off im not in countdown nor IRC im goin to IRC(WELL TRYIN) then u neva dissed me in ya life if so i would have had a diss out by now This is Not Kid Blaze or who eva Jay hussle new here thank u

01-30-2007, 05:13 PM	#24
J~Souljah Veteran Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Baltimore, Maryland Posts: 1,826 Repped: 11 Repped 97 Times in 67 Posts Neg Reps: 1 Neg Repped at 21 Times in 16 Posts	lol i thought u was hyphy or whoeva lol 1~1

01-30-2007, 06:15 PM	#25
Over_Flow Banned Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Queens. NY Posts: 2,793 Repped: 525 Repped 939 Times in 277 Posts Neg Reps: 0 Neg Repped at 0 Times in 0 Posts	lmao j dont count kabooms vote...kaboom aint even on tha mc list and if he was they would have 2 make a spot for low low low low low low low rookie..check his hit he wack....so its 1-0 j.....o ya and i should be mid inter but sum guy wouldnt chage the damn mc list cuz he lazy lol

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